Akela pan mehsoos hota tha apni tanhayee ke bina
Kho gayi thi main zindagi ke mele mein
Mushgul rehti thi kaii jhamelon mein
Bhool gaii thi tanhayee ka aalam
Sochana chod diya tha akele mein
Ab phir se saath jud gaya hai tanhayee se
Tanha Dil khil utha hai khushi se
Khud se ab tanhayee mein batein hongi
Suljhenge sabhi maslen aasani se
Umeed hai saath bana rahega tumse
Varna yeh safar katega mushkil se
23 comments:
Oye, why such morbid thoughts? Tanhayee ke saath bhala koi reh sakta hai kya? Leave it to Amitabh "Main aur meri tanhayee" Bachchan.
Abhi to tere khelne koodne ke din hai deviji :)
@Seema - TAnhayee se mera matlab contemplation hai, loneliness nahi. Morbid khayalaat toh kabhi mujhe aate hi nahin.
well i shall get an hindi dictionary and come back..but one thing for sure..i shall pick my hindi soon..visiting ur blog!!
hei how about giving a gist of wat u have written.. in english..with that i shall understand wat is written in hindi..well it wud sure be helpful for non hindi speakers like me.
and hei..jus noticed..thanks for putting "arabian night" in ur links...ah its catchy..never thought about the name myself..he he..but there are 3 "http://" there..
@godolphin - Uh-Oh so you want a gist, I will try to explain as best as I can.
Tanhayee means loneliness or just being with yourself in your own thoughts.
So what I am saying is that I had stopped being with myself. I got involved in too many things, things which are not really important.
I had stopped thinking or contemplating.
But now I have started spending time with myself again and my heart is soaring high. I am able to understand myself again and I hope this will continue or else life will be unbearable.
wow..bhagya...thats nicely said..such beautiful way of saying..
..now after the gist..i can understand the hindi one more better..thanks..
i will be brushing my hindi fast more than ever..on reading ur posts!!
@godolphin - thanks for bringing the error to my notice, it has been corrected.
and thx for the praise too
Akelapan mahshoosh hotaa hain apanee tanhayee ke binaa,
tanhaa rahate hain hum akshar apanee tanhaayee ke binaa.
chookar mere man ko kisee ne
meree tanhaayee ko fir se jagayaa hain,
aaj kaafee dino baad ,
mujhe , eik baar fir se,mujhse milayaa hain.
fir se maine jindagee to tanhayee kee chaadar mein lapetaa hain,
fir se maine jindagee ko kisee aur najar se dekhaa hain.
aaj fir se jindageee mushkuraa see uthee hain,
mujhe apane saamane paa ke lahlahaa see uthee hain.
Aaj fir se jindagee ke daaman mein kuch kaliyaa mushkuraayee hain.
aaj fir se jindagee se milane meree
tanahayee aayee hain.
@Dukhee_Aatamaa - you must be wanting to post this on ur blog, but by mistake posted it in my comment box.
:-)
Reminds me of the song Tanhaai!
And thanx for visiting... : )
@AakASH- Hey thx for stopping by.
naa Bhagya read your poem and started writting some thing and ended up writting this. It was to be part of your blog's comment secion
sab maya hai.. bhagya.. tanhaiyee ki bhi apni hi maya hai..!! aur saaathoyon ke saath ki bhi apni hi ek maya hai..!!
((meri maya kaha hai..!!))
hi bhagya, liked both the poems. Tanhayee is reall good. I feel this sometimes too.
kya baat full too shayari-vaayari chal rahi hai ... good good
( i heard from reliable sources that u r coming up with a spoof...kab?)
yeah bhagya..maebhi apka spoof kaeliye..intezaar kar raha hoon...btw is my sentence formation right??
@Me - if I am not wrong I think u have already found ur Maya.
@priyangini - Thx priya
@deepakjeswal- Ya, koshish jari hai, adhi kahani hai, poori karne samay nahi hai.
@godolphin - yups sentence is right only instead of apka you shld have said apke :-)
WHERE IS MY SIS?? WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER....SCREAAAAMMMMMM
yeah.. i try to watch her every monday 9PM on star one..!!
@me..- ummm so this time I will watch too, lets see whom you talking abt.
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