Friday, September 16, 2005
55 words
It was dark and lonely she felt somebody following her. She hastened her steps, but the feeling persisted. She hid in an alley, waiting to catch her stalker .......... still waiting ....... there is nobody. She is relieved. She comes out and starts walking leaving her fear behind. Courage joins her it was following her all along.
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Counting the dots... the story exceeds the limit :p
he he ... good one sir... as usual :)
dots aint words. And I could have done with out them. Hmpf.
How to piss Jaadya - Part 1
Servings: 1 average sized Jaadya per incident
Ingredients:
1 Male friend whom she dosent see eye to eye with
3 to 4 well chosen words (She has an affinity to the word "Relax")
Assorted numb headed comments
1 Large sized Insult
Preparation:
Start off with a simmering covert conversation about electronic gadgets over a chat window and continue simmering till a few bubbles of happiness are seen on both yours and friends face.
When the conversation is about ready and has turned verbal have the friend come over and make boisterous comments about rock bands that Jaadya dislikes.
Wait for the right time until when Jaadya interrupts conversation with some funny words of her own.
add the 3 to 4 well chosen words to the concoction with generous helpings of relax, take it easy etc.
also pile on assorted numb headed comments. At this point of time Jaadya is already hurt and ready to be served.
Remove from simmer and garnish with Large sized Insult.
In case you want to know if Jaadya is completely pissed or not, say something conciliatory, if she just makes grunting noises without looking at you, you know you are done.
There you have it, Jaadya has been Pissed.
AntiDote: In case you want to mend things, and i know I want to, dont say things like please dont be angry etc, dosent have any effect, beleive me i have tried.
Say "Sorry" like i am trying to here and hope she smiles again
Bellissimo!!
This 55 words things seems to be catching up he thought. Maybe he too should write something like that.
He switched on his PC. And then the power cut occured.
Leaving him stranded just like she did. He'd always had problems keeping it short.
AakASH!!! - Great. Ha Ha Ha. Been a week I go to anybody's blog and find 55 words staring at me.
what's with this "55 Words"???
@pulse - just try doing kanjoosi with words.
ah nice one bhagya..were dots the fillers??LOL
@godolphin - no dots were not feelers, just added them for effect. LOL
"feelers"??? ahem *cough cough*
Oops I did it again.
bhagya..looks like u need a good break..he he LOL...weekend almost there na!!
Bhagyaism of the Day....
Feelers (n): words that are used to 'feel' the gaps between sentences.
ha ha ha nice one seema..LOL
Very good....short and sweet...!
its nice to see so many people on the creative platform with the things they are coming up with 55 words..!! ((with seema and bhagya around.. that "platform" ka jaroor kuch gadbad hone wala hai..!! :-) ))
but seriously, nice work re.. with words and the "feelers.."
Walkin with gutz, n u dont walk alone at all ;-)
also thought abt this...at times u shud have the perception like a 'Rear view mirror' so that u become cautious of wats happening behind u !
@IcEyeZ-Yeah if only we had a rear view mirror, the phrase 'behind your back' would have an entirely diff. meaning.
@Me.. - Thanks re :D
Thanks Rusty
GM bhagya..so wats cooking??
Right now its my bheja cooking :-)
kya hua..saturday bhi aap kaam kar rahe ho??? [did u understand wat im trying to say..ha ha]
Confessions of a scared Dim:
Sometimes i get scared of Jaadya. The wild look in the eyes, the rasping, almost animal-like voice.
Its not a pretty picture. gotta go before she reads this post.
@godolphin - Yups me is working. Me has to complete some assignment, so working on that right now. Saturday bhi matlab kya, like I work on the other days of the week. :-)
ha ha woh tho alag kahani hae [wat iam attempting to say is "its a different story"] :-) like who works at office these days!!! LOL
hey really nice story ..infact very different too ;-)
Arre wah ... great stuff here ... nice twist in the end.
Read about ur floaters - my condolences :P ...
nice story
Parna, gayathri, deepak, Dukhee_Aatamaa, thanks guys.
Hi Ashish, you are just too funny.
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